《Review of Unit 1课件》初中英语科普版九年级上册_2.pptVIP

Some of the teachers come here for the first time. As the host ,what should we do? We should introduce our school to them. How to introduce our school? I think we’d better write a composition (作文)first. What is a good composition ? “一点”: 有“亮点” .有独到之处。 “二整”: 书写工整,卷面整洁。 “三要”: 数量要达标, 词汇和语法 , 结构 要准确、上下文要连贯。 “四不行”: 漏掉内容不行, 写错体裁不行，用错人称不行，用错时态不行。 书面表达写作技巧 审 Lie in What should we say? Our school lies in Xinglong. What should we say? Our school was set up on April 20th, 1972. There are more than 1000 students in our school. What should we say? There are 80 teachers in our school. What should we say? It makes our school very beautiful. What should we say? We are trying our best to make it more and more beautiful. 1.恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。 Our school lies in Xinglong ,a small town which is next to Laifeng,Hubei Province. Our school has 42 years of history. There are 80 teachers and more than 1000 students in our school. We planted many beautiful trees and flowers .It makes our school very beautiful .The environment is quite clean and quiet. We are trying our best to make it more and more beautiful. Our school lies in a small town —Xinglong , which is next to Laifeng , Hubei Province. Our school has a history of 42 years. There are 80 teachers and more than 1000 students in our school .They are all very hard-working and kind-hearted. We planted many beautiful trees and flowers in it ,so it is very beautiful. And the environment is quite clean and quiet .Nowadays, we are trying our best to make it more and more beautiful. Homework 1.认真思考，找出自己在写书面表达时容易出 现的问题。 2.挖空：在今天这篇短文中挖出8个空。 3写一篇自己最满意的短文，介绍自己的班级或家庭（80-100字）。 * 兴隆中学 张 高 How can we write a good composition(作文)? 列 加 美 Our school lies in Xinglong. Lie in Xionglong is next to Laifeng , Hubei Province. Next to Xinglong is next to Laifeng , Hubei Province. Our school lies in a small town — Xingllong, which is next to Laifeng , Hub