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CET-4 Writing (Part 4) 记叙文写作 记叙文是一种基本的写作技巧，近年的四级考试中也有考察过且形式灵活，写好记叙文最基本的是掌握以下要素： 1. 首先必须确定写些什么，然后懂得如何收集、选取素材，而不能提笔就写，写到哪里算哪里。这里，我们可以借用新闻英语写作中经常用到的五个“W”和一个“H”的概念。即：What（事件），Who（人物）， When （时间）,Where（地点），Why（原因），How （怎么样）。尽管不是每篇英语记叙文都一定要将这些W和H包括进去，但是，一方面，确定写作内容、收集写作素材必定要围绕这五个W和一个H进行；另一方面，一篇好的英语记叙文读后不应让读者还存有上述疑问。 2. 确定以第几人称以及何种顺序展开记叙 一般来说，英语记叙文展开记叙的视角有两个：第一人称和第三人称。第一人称是从“参与者”的角度进行记叙；第三人称是以“观察者”的身份展开叙述，要根据具体情况合理选用。在用第一人称的记叙文中，不要过多地使用“I…”，“We…”这样的句型，以免给人单调乏味的感觉。在以第三人称进行记叙时，要避免过多的评论，以至失去记叙文的客观性。 记叙文写作框架 第一段、总结描述: 交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：主题句第二段、具体描述: 具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果：起因＋经过＋结果第三段、对事件的分析：分析句1+分析句2+分析3 真题再现 1. 假设你在某日某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书包括以下几点： (1). 车祸发生的时间及地点 (2).你所见到的车祸情况 (3).你对车祸原因的分析 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident It was about 5 p.m on June 26. I was on my way to the bookstore. I remember the time clearly because I had just finished my computer course that day. Just as I turned the corner I spotted this dashing beautiful BMW. Parked beside the street, its bright color and streamlined shape caught everybody’s attention. I was about to admire the car when a dog came into my view. It was wandering in the middle of the street. Just at the moment, a sports car from the east turned up. It was too late when the driver saw the dog. He steered to avoide hitting the dog but before anyone could react, a loud “bang” deafened my ears. The sports car ran into the beautiful BMW. I would say the whole accident was the dog’s fault. But if the sports had not been that fast or if the BMW had been safely put in the parking lot, things would have been quite different. 2. The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (Got Injured) (1). 简单叙述一下这位同学生病／受伤的情况 (2). 同学、老师和我是如何帮助他／她的 (3). 人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是…. The Day My Classmate Fell Ill(or Got inhured) It so happened that one day we were having an English class in the language lab. Just at that time, my classmate Lucy next to me fell unconscious suddenly. It impressed me most because her face was so red