英语写作4小步.pptVIP

让作文灵动的办法 一、使用适当的连词和连词短语及过渡语 二、改变传统语序 三、使用不同的从句和句型 四、使用非谓语动词 五、运用开放思维加定语 An Unforgettable Experience 1.今年暑假，我和家人去了大连 2.早餐后，我们乘巴士去了海洋公园。那里有很多鱼，还有海豚表 演，午餐在饭店吃了海鲜 3.午餐后去游泳，海水蓝，沙滩金黄，我们玩得很开心，最后我们回到了旅馆。 4.我们还去了大连一些别的地方 5.我们过了一个美好的假期 习作 An Unforgettable Experience I went to Dalian with my family this summer holiday. We got there by air. 　　 After breakfast in the morning，we began to start our travel. First we took the bus to the Sea Park. There are many different kinds of fishes . And there was the show of dolphins. Then we had seafood for lunch in a restaurant. 　　 After lunch we went swimming. The sea was blue and beach was golden. We all enjoyed ourselves in the sea. Finally we went back the hotel ,We had a happy day. 　　In this trip，we also went to some places in Dalian 　　 we had a good holiday. 修改后作文 This summer holiday， together with my family, I went by air to Dalian, which is a very beautiful and modern city. 　　 In the morning，having had the breakfast，we began to start our travel. First we took the bus to the Sea Park. Where there are so many different kinds of fishes that I couldnt believe my eyes. What’s more, We also saw the show of dolphins. Then we had lunch in a restaurant, enjoying the seafood which was very delicious and famous in China. 　　 The greatest thing, I think，is the swinning after the lunch. So blue was the sea and so golden was the beach that we all enjoyed ourselves so much. By sunset ,we went back to the hotel where we lived, tired but happily. During the trip，we also went to some places which were interesting and famous in Dalian,and again, we had a lot of fun. 　　 what a wonderful holiday! Thank you * *