雅思写作素材寻找与题目分析.docVIP

Mission Statement 素材寻找与题目分析 有学生的QQ签名是“我写得不是雅思作文，是寂寞”。何出此言呢，源于题目读懂了，却一时不知写什么，该怎么写。因此看懂题目后的素材寻找以及从何入手就变得至关重要了。有人建议头脑风暴找素材，但需要一定的线索。那么具体可以从哪些方面考量呢？题干中是否有蛛丝马迹可供我们入手呢？ An idea that can be put into action is far better than an idea only exists as an idea. 以下有三种方法供同学们参考。 分类法 替代法 裸奔法 分类法； 当题目的讨论对象A 过于广泛或者抽象时，请将讨论对象具体化，对其加以分类为A1 与A2 。比如分成两类，那么素材就比原来增加了一倍，一分为二，从不同角度看待一个事物也是雅思写作的一个特点，具体说明： Sample: 1 Sending criminals to the prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree? 直接从犯罪分子入手写作，范围较为广，不易展开，实际写作中易于突然中断，不妨将CRIMINALS这个庞大的人群一分为二，分为重刑犯与轻型罪犯，这样各自归档，恶性犯罪的蹲监入狱，轻型罪犯接受教育，全文分为四段来写一目了然。 第一段：引入背景，社会犯罪率在升高，对待犯罪的惩处有不同的看法 Since the crime rate is rising now, how to deal with criminals has become a relatively new issue in newspapers and on television in recent years. Opinions to this are deeply divided. 第二段：将犯罪分子一分为二，恶性犯罪犯本应送进监狱，甚至枪毙也不为过For the extremely violent criminals, such as murderers, robbers who kill their victims, they should be sentenced to longer years in prison, and some can even be sentenced to death if that will do justice. 第三段：对于罪孽不深重的犯罪分子要让他们接受教育 On the other hand, some minor criminals who do wrong to others on impulse but are ready to reform should be granted another chance. 这样更有利于他们改造 if these misfits could be given some education and job training, they would not only learn some practical skills, but also have the courage to start a brand new life. 第四段：总结，惩罚的目的不是惩罚本身 To conclude, I firmly believe the purpose of any punishment is not punishment itself, but to prevent potential crimes and teach the criminals a lesson on the value of a normal life and freedom.从善意出发，同意用教育的方式改造犯人更为合理，Education and training would work more effectively in achieving this end than prison, at least for most minor criminals. 链接犯罪类常用词汇扩展： 违反法律：violate the law 不良行为，非法行为：misdeed:(formal) a wrong or illegal action. e.g. he now repents of his past misdeeds. 贩毒犯：trafficker 走私贩：smuggler 故意破坏公物者：vandal 死刑犯:prisone