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10月月考作文讲评   Tips 高考英语书面表达高分标准 ① 覆盖所有内容要点 ② 应用较多的语法结构和词汇 ③ 有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 假如你是高三(1)班的班长李华，得知美国学生Chris作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件。 (1) 表示欢迎； (2) 介绍本班情况及与本地生活相关的信息（如气候，饮食等）； (3) 希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊。 Dear Chris, I’m Li Hua, monitor of Class One, Grade Twelve.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua I. 审题： 体裁和格式： 人称: 写作内容及时态： 邮件（属书信体，格式已给出） 书面表达 you, I, we 一般现在时，一般将来时 注意： (1) 请勿提及相关的真实信息； (2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； (3) 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 在作文里不能涉及任何所在地区、学校的信息，否则高考时会被视为作弊行为。 字数不能超12行， 否则扣2分！ 转换应试意识 表达言简意赅 II. 佳句背诵 1.Knowing/When /On knowing the news that you’re coming to be with us as an exchange student this coming term, we can not conceal our excitement and look forward to your arrival. 得知… 我们…. 2. The moment we know the news that … word s fail to describe our excitement ） 得知… 我们…. . 二.介绍-----同位语，非谓语，定从，with结构 1.Our class consists of 50 optimistic and easy-going students , all of whom are willing to accept you as one of us and make you feel at home. Not only will they make acquaintance with you ,but also they would like to give you a hand when you are in rouble. 2. My Class , a big family consisting of 50 optimistic and easy-going students, are willing to accept you asone of us and make you feel at home. 4.Consisting of 50 students ,our class seems like a big family with a relaxing and harmonious atmosphere , which will make you feel at home. 3.Consisting of 50 optimistic and easy-going students, my class is a big family ,in which we live together in harmony. 4.Class 1, where you are going to study ,is a big family consisting of 50 students, all of whom are willing to accept you as one of us and make you feel at home. 5. My city ,a fascinating harbor /a fascinating coastal city , enjoys pleasant weather, with bright sunshine all the year round. 6.L