非谓语动词在写作中的运用-李萍课件.pptVIP

With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work. Besides, doing exercise regularly is of great benefit to our health. Last but not least, it is very important to keep a balanced diet. 二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 三. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力 四. 尝试多 样化表达方式 一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力 ①强调句 ②With短语复合结构 ③定语从句 ④名词性从句(主宾表同从句) ⑤各种状语从句 ⑥被动语态 书面表达评分档次 情景作文共分6档给分 第1档 1820 分 第2档 1517 分 第3档 1214 分 第4档 6 11 分 第5档 1 5 分 第6档 0 分 08北京高考： 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为 “Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。 注意：词数不少于60。 提示词：游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin 讨论 爬山 捡拾别人的垃圾 投放垃圾 常用语： 1.Last Friday left me a deep impression, which I will never forget. Last week, I / my brother had an unforgettable experience. 2. In order to improve our abilities of facing danger, our school organized an activity. 按时间顺序描写 3. Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went to…by bus. One Sunday morning, my classmates and I went to the park for an picnic. 4 After doing…, we went to do…. 5.Having done…,we…….. 6. And then, we….. 结尾语： I was tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed. I have learned a great deal through the activity. It is an unforgettable day / experience 评论语/感慨 I think the activity is both necessary and meaningful. It not only makes us aware of the importance of self- protection/helping others/protecting our environment but also develop our abilities of dealing with things /communicating with others. 2.The activity can develop /promote our sense of social responsibility. .心情语