四级强化班.pptVIP

四级强化班 写作 理论技巧篇 四级考试评分标准 2－ 4－ 8－ 11－ 14－ 遣词造句 写完整句，避免错误句式： 1.残缺句 1） 误用非谓语动词 [误] Why does he call home once a week? To keep in touch with his family. [正] He calls home once a week to keep in touch with his family. [误] Some people firmly agree, but others against it. [正] Some people firmly agree, but others are against it. 2). 误用标点符号[误] Some people think one should read selectively. Because some books are beneficial to him and some books are harmful to him.[正] Some people think one should read selectively because some books are beneficial to him and some books are harmful to him. 遣词造句 2.多重谓语 1) [误] In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated. [正] In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks. 2) [误] Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad. [正] Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty. 遣词造句 3. 连写句 [误] There are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, we should not read them.[正] There are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind. We should not read them. [误] She had a wig on, it looked more like a hat than a wig.[正] She had a wig on, and it looked more like a hat than a wig. [误] The house is too small for a family of four, it is in bad location.[正] The house is too small for a family of four; furthermore, it is in bad location. 遣词造句－谓语动词保持一致 句子须保持前后一致 －人称和数 [误] Somebody hold that one should read selectively.[正] Somebody holds that one should read selectively. －时态 [误] Many students complained that the canteen service is terribly awful.[正] Many students complained that the canteen service was terribly awful. －语气 [误] This movie is really fantastic, with beautiful actr