专四作文模板一 给定观点型作文.ppt

Writing ;; Title:?? Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? Outline： A. Presenting the arguments on the topic and stating my stand: tourism will not bring harm B. Giving reasons: tourists’ environment awareness, boosting economy, etc. C. Conclusion: as long as tourists have cultivated environment awareness, it’s not harm but benefit that will be brought ;;;;Composition Marking Criteria;;;;;;Composition Marking Criteria;Writing ;Contents; 给定观点型模式框架;介绍;给定观点型;实例分析;2003 TEM-4; The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood Recently，people in modern society live under a lot of pressure from education，career or family．We often hear cases of going mad or committing suicide by those who cannot handle pressure well．So，it becomes a hot topic．I think，it is important to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances and no matter what happens． ;;; 此题为给定明确观点型的命题式作文，给定考生一个明确的论点，要求考生给出论据，去分析论证这个论点，考生不需要考虑给出论点，只需要考虑如何能很好的证明论点。这个题目说到现代社会中，人们承受了大量的压力，如教育、职业发展、家庭等等。所以，保持一个良好的情绪很重要。 范文的开头以背景现象手段开始，介绍了近年来人们面临的压力越来越大，导致了很多发疯自杀的现象，因此调节压力，保持心态很重要。 正文从两方面进行了论证，一方面良好的心态情绪有助于与他人搞好关系。然后作者又深入的举了一些例子来阐述这一点的好处。另一方面，好的心态会使人保持健康的身体。 结尾，作者提出我们必须要充分重视好情绪的重要性，这样才能面对社会的种种压力。 这篇文章把握了题目的要求，论证良好心态的重要性，论点清晰，论述清楚，结构合理。; 2001-TEM-4 ; Travel Broadens the Mind Nowadays，travel becomes a popular activity．More and more people have enough money to travel abroad or at home. As a matter of fact，travel has become part of our life．A common ground has been reached that travel can broaden our mind． The first reason why I have such a view is that travel can help us know the different people and different customs．We can meet people with different interests；we can see strange things；we can get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people；we can taste different foods and local dishes；we can understand how people live in different ways．The further reason is that travel can help us enjoy the beautiful scenery in differen