初中英语写作课《paragraph 不writing》.pptVIP

Learning Target (学习目标) We are learning how to write a paragraph to show ideas. paragraph ? 段落 Yao Ming, the center of the Chinese National Men’s Basketball Team, served the Huston Rockets in the 2002 NBA. The 2.26 m, 120 kg center becomes the first one to come from a foreign team. Yao Ming was born in Shanghai in September, 1980. His mother was a center and captain of the Chinese National Women’s Team. His father played basketball, too. Sport analyst Bill Walton said, “Yao Ming has the potential the capability of changing the future of basketball.” Success Criteria (目标达成要求) □1.I can write a strong topic sentence. 2.I can write three detail sentences. □ □ 3.I can write a closing sentence. 4.I can use words or phrases to make the ideas more clear. □ 5.I can check my grammar, spelling and punctuation(, . ! …) after writing. □ G/N G-Good N-needs improvement detail sentence1 detail sentence2 detail sentence3 closing sentence topic sentence body beginning ending Task1: Underline the topic sentence. Task2:*Add transitional words or phrases for detail sentences.(添加过渡语) *Write a closing sentence. A lot of people think it is good to keep animals in zoos.____ zoos are place for people to see many different kind of animals from all over the word. Without zoos, most of the people would never see tigers, lions ,elephants……. ____zoos look after the animals very well. The animals are always given food and cleaned regularly. ____zoos protect the animals well. They offer them safe places to live in. ______________. Word Wall—Transitional Words(过渡语） 表示层次 detail1 detail2 detail3 表示总结 closing first, firstly, first of all, to begin (start )with, second，secondly, then, next, after that, besides, what’s more third, thirdly, finally, lastly, at last，in the end in a word, in short , as a result Task 3:Reread the paragraph for mistakes and correct them. A lot of people think it is good to keep animals in zoos.