Unit 1 riendship writing 课件.ppt

Unit 1 Friendship writing 写作步骤 1. Creating a motivation to write 2. Brainstorming 3. Mapping 4. Outlining 5. Drafting 6. Editing 7. Revising */10 1. Creating a motivation to write having a clear purpose or reason to write The letter on page 7 1. What problem does Xiao Dong have? 2. What is Xiao Dong asking for? 1. He is not good at communicating with people and can’t make good friends with them. 2. He is asking for some advice to change the situation. */10 2. Brainstorming listing all the ideas related to the topic Ideas Why 1. to ask people their likes and dislikes 1. to find classmates with the same interests 2. to join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas 2. to get to know different people and let them see you are friendly */10 3. Mapping 3. Mapping organising useful ideas 1. change yoursef be confident always smile say hello to everyone 2. improve yourself learn more communicating skills help people 4. Outlining 首段： 开门见山，表明写作意图。在本段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的目的及原因。 Dear Xiao Dong , I’m glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about ___________ (建议的主题） The following is my advice. 正文：委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告。 First, why not...? If you do this, ... Secondly, you should/can... Then/That way, ... Thirdly, it would be a good idea if ... By doing this, ... 末段：礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。 I hope you will find these ideas ______, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to _____________. Yours Sincerely, ... 5. Drafting writing according to your mapping In my opinion, you should ... My opinion is ... I believe we should … I don’t think it’s necessary to ... I advise you to ... We must decide ... I’m afraid that ... I think you should ... Don’t worry ... 6. Editing peer editing: offering praise and suggestions picking out mistakes self-editing: correcting mistakes improving the le