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记叙文 记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，以写人、叙事为主要内容。它可以包括历史，游记，报道，回忆，故事，琐事等。 这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三人称角度出发，表达自己或他人的经历或感受，使读者对事情十分明了以获得强烈感受。　 记叙文通常以一般过去时为主，根据上下文用各种时态。 记叙文写作的注意事项 例文– A traffic accident 首段：首段概括交代事件发生的时间、地点、人物等信息 A week ago, I witnessed a traffic accident in a rainy day on my way to school, which still sticks in my mind. 例文– A traffic accident 中心段：交待细节，注重在how; 交待细节时应注意的事项？ 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。 中心段细节描写练习 请找出下文与主题无关的细节 An accident This afternoon I went out in the country to see my grandparents. After I got out there I decided to take a short drive. I drove down to East Greenwich, which is about eight miles from Centreville. While coming home I was obliged to follow the railroad for a mile or two. When I had gone about half a mile I heard a terrible whistling ahead of me. On coming near to where the sound came from, I discovered that an express train had run into the rear end of a freight train. Fortunately no one was seriously hurt, although I heard on man say that he never got shaken up so badly in his life before. The engine of the express train was somewhat disabled, as the cow-catcher was broken and the head-light and the smoke-stack were knocked off. No one seemed to know the cause of the accident. 例文– A traffic accident 中心段：交待细节，注重在how; 交待细节时应注意的事项？ 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。 因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关的内容，从而点明文章中心。 从首段也可看出 文章重点在traffic  accident和stick in my mind 例文– A traffic accident中心段赏析 It was about 7:00 on Friday morning, (Oct. 31st).（补充说明时间）I was walking through the pedestrian overpass near my school when I was shocked by the screech of a car. （事情的起因）I saw a man knocked down by a black car. Soon many cars were jammed there. I got there and found that beside a black Benz lay a middle-aged man in a pool of blood. （交代一些细节）The street turned chaotic.（事情的大致经过）After a moment, the police and an ambulance arrived. The victim was instantly sent to the hospital.（事情的结果） 例文– A traffic accident结尾段赏析 结尾段：可适当发表一点议论 　　　In my opinion, the pedestrian sho