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高 考 英 语 写 作;高考英语作文评分标准; 1．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 内容：不要漏要点 不要偏差 某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1.该谚语的含义；2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。（2014山东卷） 　　①A friend in need is a friend indeed. 　　②Where there’s a will, there’s a way. 　　注意：1.词数：120-150； 　　2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 　　;语言：不要中式 eg. 1.Your future should yourself fighting for. 2.We are walking along with the modern science way. 3.The program makes me learn more knowledge. ;The reason why peer pressure has been studied a lot these years is because it has powerful inflence on behavior. ; 2．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 ;think in my opinion because agree with important effect good many people but ;so very be coming soon lead to pay attention to remember have be good at helpful more and more people like;语法结构： There is a problem in our life at present.The air is polluted now. ; ,I didnt realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. ,I did most of the duties myself while other students care little about class activities. ,I was tired out and depressed. I turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class.;The boy comes from a poor family. The boy does very well in his studies. The boy plans to work his way through college. 使用连词： he comes from a poor family, the boy does very well in his studies; , he plans to work his way through college.;替换and Also / BesidesIn addition Furthermore, Moreover(formal) 注意这两个词是用于第二次以上的“and” What is more Equally（同等地) / Likewise(同样地) ;替换But How