高中英语作文写作指导-《回复电子邮件》.doc

回复电子邮件 【文体指导】 一般来说回复邮件，主要根据所收到邮件的具体内容进行清楚明了的答复，并附带简单问候。语言要简洁，态度要诚恳，格式要正确。 首先要认真阅读对方邮件的具体内容，找出对方提出的问题，然后有针对性地评价对方的观点，提出自己的观点，具体写作步骤为： 第一段：收到邮件的心情、时间等。 第二段：答复邮件所提的问题。 1．评价对方的观点是否正确、合理。 2．给出理由，可以灵活地通过举例进行论证。 第三段：提出自己的观点和建议等。总结并问候。 【常用句式】 1．Im happy/glad/pleased to receive your e－mail dated by May 1st. 2．Im sorry not to answer/reply to your e－mail in time because I have been busy these days. 3．Im sorry to learn that... 4．Im glad to receive your e－mail saying that... 5．Meanwhile，smoking is...Besides... 6．As far as I am concerned，we should... 7．More and more people have realized how serious the problem is. 8．In order to...we must... 9．Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. 10．Please give my regards to your family. 11．If you have some more questions，let me know. 【写作任务】 假设你是某中学的高一学生李华，你于2016年5月18日收到了美国笔友Harry发来的一封电子邮件。请你仔细阅读他的邮件并回复他。 注意：1.邮件的内容应包括对Harry打算戒烟表示高兴； 2．对戒烟提出一些具体建议，并期望他能够成功地戒烟。 From Harry@ To Li?Hua008@126.com Subject Give?me?some?advice?about?giving?up?smoking. Sent Monday，May?18th,2016,10：30?am Dear?Li?Hua， Glad?to?hear?from?you?last?Monday. In?the?past，I?thought?it?was?a?kind?of?fashion?to?smoke?and?it?was?of?great?fun?to refresh?myself?with?cigarettes. From?your?letter?Ive?learned?a?lot?about?the?harm?of?heavy?smoking.Now，Im?eager?to?give?up?smoking.Would?you?like?to?give?me?some?advice？ I?will?appreciate?it?if?you?could?give?me?a?hand. I?am?looking?forward?to?your?reply. With?best?wishes. Yours?ever， Harry 【审题谋篇】 第一步　明确要求 本文是回复电子邮件，注意邮件的格式，人称应该用第二人称，并注意提出的建议中祈使句、情态动词和时态的使用。 第二步　确定段落 本文可以用三段式来布局： Para.1：对Harry打算戒烟表示高兴 Para.2：对戒烟提出一些具体建议 Para.3：期望与鼓励 第三步　词汇热身 1．戒烟give up smoking 2．提供一些建议offer some advice 3．在公共场合in public places 4．远离烟草stay away from tobacco 5．抵制吸烟的斗争the struggle against smoking 第四步　句式升级 1．我非常高兴知道你要下定决心戒烟。 (一般表达)Im very glad to know that you decide to stop smoking. (句式升级) Im very glad to learn that you are determined to give up/quit smoking.(be determined to do) 2．不要到人们吸烟的公共场合。 (一般表达)If people are smoking in public places，please dont go