中考英语写作复习《环境保护》同步教学课件.pptVIP

Writing mode Connect the sentences with link words to introduce supporting points: Firstly… Secondly … Thirdly… What’s more… First of all,… Also… Finally, … However,… not only…but (also)… as well… neither … nor… either…or… Post-writing 1.Good structure（结构合理） 2分 2. Full content（内容完整） I often… because…（至少3方面） 4 分 3. Correct expression（表达准确） 1）Correct tense（时态准确） 2）Conjunctions(连词) 5分 4. Rich expression（语言丰富） Good words and sentences 2分 5.Good handwriting（书写优美） 2分 Summary A good passage of “giving opinions” Topic Sentence Body  Supporting points Right Link wordsand sentence patterns Conclusion Practice Makes Perfect！ 请你以“保持城市环境干净”为主题，写一份倡议书。 内容包括： 1.保护城市环境是我们的职责（duty）; 2.列出能保护城市环境的建议（至少三条）； 3.发出号召。 Homework Where there is a will, there is a way. Work hard, and you can make your dream come true! Thank you * 潮州市城南中学 蔡丽纯 My Low-carbon Life Discussion: What words or phrases do you hope to see when you see the word “ environment”? Environment clean Mind-map fresh clear green … dirty rubbish no fish more and more cars burn coal pollute the air black smoke noise pollution land pollution The earth is badly polluted. Pollution is bad for us all. The earth is our home. It is everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment. Everyone should play a part in protecting the environment. It starts with small things around us. What can we do to protect the environment? Task As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse today. Water is polluted, many trees are cutting down, some animals are getting less and less. Some factories are pouring dirty air into the sky. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. People’s health has been greatly affected by pollution. In order to live a better life, something must be done to stop the pollution. It’s our duty to protect our environment. We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. Trees are ve