英语人教版九年级全册“确-联-作-改”四步八环写作模式.pptxVIP

复习专题：书面表达“确—联—作—改” 四步八环写作模式学习目标：通过“确—联—作—改”四步八环写作模式的学习，学生能使用这一方法打开思路进行写作。确：联：作：改：中心、文体、结构联想、连词成句、连句成篇写作改错词、错误语法、改卷面Example 1（郑州一模，2015） 寒假就要到了。很多学生打算在假期打工锻炼自己，可是有些家长不同意。他们认为打工既耽误学习，又不太安全。请你以“Should?teenagers?be?allowed?to?have?part-time?jobs?”?为题写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你的看法。确：中心、文体、结构中心：Teenagers should be allowed to have part- time jobs.文体：议论文结构：总-分-总联：联想、连词成句、连句成篇experience?different?livesget?more?knowledge?learn?about?the?difficulty?of?making?a?livinghave?chances?to?make?decisions?by?themselves.?……Winter?holiday?is?coming.?Many?students?plan?to?have?part-time?jobs.?But?some?parents?disagree.IntroductionIn?my?opinion,?teenagers?should?be?allowed?to?do?some?part-time?jobs.Should?teenagers?be?allowed?to?have?part-timejobs??First,?they can?experience?different?lives?and?get?more?knowledge?outside?school.BodySecond, after?learning?about?the?difficulty?of?making?a?living,?they?will?cherish?what?they?have?now.?Third, teenagers?should?have?chances?to?make?decisions?by?themselves.??????All in all, I think it is good for students to do part-time jobs.ConclusionIt’s your turn now!请以“ _____ is important”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1. 先把题目补充完整； 2．短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息； 3．词数 80 左右。