英语人教版九年级全册中考复习备考-书面表达.ppt

中考英语书面表达高分突破; 孝感市中招英语作文评分标准;;2016年孝感市英语中考题 XI．书面表达（共15分） 3月5日是学雷锋纪念日，你校师生去敬老院开展志愿者活动。假如你是李华，请通过邮件将此活动情况介绍给Mary。 活动时间：3月5日 活动地点：幸福敬老院(Nursing Home) 参与人员：志愿者 活动形式：1. 送鲜花、水果和美好的祝福。 2. 帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生…… 3. 陪老人聊天；为老人表演（唱歌、跳舞），读报…… 活动感想：此活动很有意义，从中学会了关爱老人、尊重老人…… 要求：1. 要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译，须适当发挥。2. 词数100字左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Mary, Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March. If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us. Li Hua; 写作步骤 1、审：;2. 列： 1）列出要点。单词、词组和句型 2）布局：加首尾。 ; ;3.帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生…… help the old people to tidy the room and sweep the floor 4.陪老人聊天；为老人表演（唱歌、跳舞），读报…… chat with the old people，perform for the old people ，sing and dance for the old people read newspapers ... 5. 添加：为老人讲故事...tell stories to them 尊老爱幼的看法 We should respect the old. 来去的交通方式，时间等，回来的感受。 We went there by bus. We got back at 3 oclock in the afternon. We were tired, but very happy. ;考卷开头已经写明了目的。 (开头)Dear Mary, Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March. This is th day we did some activites to learn from LeiFeng . （结尾) We were very tired, but very happy. ;3.帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生…… help the old people tidy the room and sweep the floor 4.陪老人聊天；为老人表演（唱歌、跳舞），读报…… chat with the old people. sing , dance,and read newspapers for the old people. 5. 添加：1） 活动：为老人讲故事... tell stories to them. 2）看法和评价： We should respect the old people。 The old people should be respected. We were so tired, but we felt very happy. ;3、连 1)连词成句 ;1.师生去幸福敬老院(Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动。 We students went to the Nursing Home with our teachers. We went there and did some activities to help the old people. 2.送鲜花、水果和美好