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大学英语写作 四、六级写作的要求 四级作文和六级作文的要求基本是相同的。 1． 篇幅：120-150字 达不到字数要求的，要酌情扣1-5分； 90-99 扣1分，80-90扣2分，70-79扣3分，60-69扣5分； 2． 布局：三段式 只写一段为0-4分，只写两段0-9分； 3． 评分标准： 2分--- 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,但多数为严重错误； 5分- 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误； 8分- 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不过清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误； 11分- 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误； 14分- 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。 例如： 1） 有人认为机会是极少的 2） 有人认为机会人人都有 3） 我的看法 Sample 1 As to the opportunity, there is two different opinions: first, someone think the opportunity is little in their life. Secondly, someone consider that opportunity is existing everywhere everybody has some kinds of chance. According to my life experiment and knowledge I agree with the second idea. There is chance for everyone in some unexpected case. But if you has no preparing for it, the opportunity will lose. Those who have many preparation and much knowledge, and some good virtue, may I quip the opportunity firmly. For example, two man are appealing for a job in a company, and there is only one vacant job for the only one of the two man. How, the two man has an opportunity to get the job but the boss certainly would accept the good one. So I think the opportunity is existing to every one, but more opportunity is belongs to who has knowledge, experience, encourage and confident. 该篇文章条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎，几乎没有正确的句子，得2分。 Sample 2 Some one thinks that the opportunity is very few for him because he has never meet the chance. But other one thinks there are chances here and there, then everyone can meet opportunity. I resist the second opinion. There to are some opportunities, the important thing is that if we could catch the chance when we meet it. In our lives we have a lot of choice that need us take our heart to. For example, when I was a little boy, my health was very bad. One day a teacher advise me to join the basketball with my friends. My health become well. So I think there are opportunities for everyone. 该篇文章基本切题，但思想表达不清楚，有很多严重的语言错误，属于5分档。 Sample 3 Som