作文03-天津卷-2018年中考英语满分作文特快专刊.docVIP

作文03 天津卷 请你根据以下内容提示，以＂The Story of Li Hua＂为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在你班同学李华身上的一件事。 （1）上周五放学后李华乘公交车回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在车上。 （2）李华把橘皮捡起，放进垃圾桶。 （3）乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网上。 （4）老师知道后表扬了李华，李华说这是他应该做的。 （5）你觉得…… 参考词汇：果皮peel 垃圾桶dustbin 发布post 表扬praise 要求： （1）词数：80—100个。 （2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 The Story of Li Hua Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. ___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2018年天津卷中考作文延续了2016年的专栏投稿，在考试形式上没有什么特殊的变化，都是根据所给材料提示展开写作，文体为记叙文，话题是发生在身边的人和事，贴近生活，而且所给故事具有教育意义。这次的题目学生不会感到陌生，需要注意的是时态应该选择一般过去时，注意布置好文章结构和段落。罗列过程中不仅要注意时态、人称及短语、句型等的正确使用，更要注意拓展内容的准确性。 The Story of Li Hua Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus home from school, he saw that someone was eating an orange. To his surprise, that man just threw the peel on the ground after he had it.? Without thinking twice, Li Hua picked up the orange peel and threw it into the dustbin directly. All of the process was taken photos and posted on the Internet by a passenger. As a result, our teacher knew his good behaviour and praised him because of what he did at the class meeting. Li Hua was very humble and said he just did what he should do. We were all impressed by his words.? As far as I am concerned, the man who threw the orange peel around was not a good example, but luckily Li Hua set a good one for us. We are supposed to mind our behaviours and protect the environment around us all the time. 本文是一篇比较优秀的作文，包含所有要点；时态准确，并能围绕内容适当发挥，运用丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚。首先,根据所给题目＂The Story of Li Hua＂可确定本文体裁为记叙文，描述的是过去发生的事情，所以时态为一般过去时。文章首先开门见山的交代了事情发生的时间Last Friday，起因＂有人把橘皮扔在车上， To his surprise, that man jus