2009年6月英语四级作文预测及范文(八)（英语四级作文）.docVIP

2009年6月英语四级作文预测及范文(八)（英语四级作文） 　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese： 　　1)简单介绍个人情况　 　　2)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额 　　3)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心 　　A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan 　　_______________________________________________________________________________ 　　_______________________________________________________________________________ 　　_______________________________________________________________________________ 　　行文思路 　　本题属于情景式命题，要求写一封申请信。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：简单介绍自己的情况，表明写信目的：申请助学贷款;说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理利用贷款并表明还款决心，最后表示感谢。 　　高分范文 　　A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan 　　Sep 12th, 2008 　　To whom it may concern, 　　I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years. 　　My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan. 　　[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 　　Sincerely yours, 　　Song Xue 　　【亮点点评】 　　[1]“主修…”，现在分词作伴随状语。 　　[2]“超出…的能力范围”。 　　[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。 　　[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 　　[5]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构。 　　[6]“我保证…”，that引导同位语从句。 　　[7]“不遗余力”。 　　佳句临摩 　　1.佳句：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. 　　临摩：令人更迷惑不