2019秋人教新目标九年级英语全册同步练习题:Unit 5 单元话题写作.docVIP

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2019秋人教新目标九年级英语全册同步练习题:Unit 5 单元话题写作.doc

Unit 5 单元话题写作 [见学生用书B30] 【好题在线】 假如你是陆婷,远在美国的笔友May 给你写了一封信,想要了解中国有什么特色的食物,请给May回一封信介绍你最想推荐的中国特色食物。 要求:1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2.80~100词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear May, I want to introduce a famous Chinese food to you.Its___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lu Ting 【话题分析】 本单元的主题为“中国制造”,其常见的命题形式有:1.描述我国的某一传统技能或特色食物;2.描述这些东西的发展历史、对国内外的影响等。 【佳作欣赏】 Dear May, I want to introduce a famous Chinese food to you.Its hot pot.Hot pot is a Chinese tasteful folk dish①.No matter in the north or in the south②,people like hot pot very much and every region has its local feature③.For example,Sichuan hot pot is hot while Guangdong hot pot is famous for its freshness④.Usually⑤,there is a metal hot pot in the middle of a table.When the soup in the pot is kept simmering,put dishes into the pot⑥.Beef,mutton,fish and vegetables are the main dishes.It is extremely popular in winter because it can keep the dishes warm all the time⑦.And the atmosphere① is hot,too.Friends or relatives sit down together to have a feast①.Its a good way to relax. If you have the chance to come to China,I will take you to eat hot pot⑧. Yours, Lu Ting 【精彩点评】 ①a Chinese tasteful folk dish“一道美味的中国民间食物”、atmosphere“气氛”和have a feast“享受盛宴”等高级词汇的运用,为文章添彩加分; ②No matter in the north or in the south意为“无论南方还是北方”,作状语,no matter用在此处恰到好处; ③作者使用了and连接的并列句,说明了每个地区的火锅都有它当地的特色;local feature“当地特色”,是文章的高级词汇; ④for example引出例子,使文章细节丰富;且while用在从句中表示两者的对比,所以虽然句子较长,但句式结构简单明了,句意清晰;同时be famous for和freshness“新鲜”的使用丰富了文章的词汇; ⑤副词usually放在句首表示强调,虽然是一个简单词汇,但是作者运用得非常准确恰当; ⑥该句中put dishes into the pot这一祈使句的选用使该句干净利索; ⑦extremely“非常”一词的使用非常地道得体,提升了文章的档次;同时because引导的原因状语从句应用巧妙,逻辑合理; ⑧if引导的条件状语从句符合“主将从现”,运用恰当合理,且作为收尾句具有感染力。 【学以致用】 Ⅰ.写作微技能:1+n(n≤3)写作拓展策略 欣赏下面文本片段:Chinese__people__love__lante

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