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PAGE PAGE 1 写作训练讲义一 Module 1 Wonders of the world 模块写作要求：能够对个人熟悉的某个景观进行事实性的描述；能够描写真实的或虚拟的旅行经历和个人感受。 写作训练三步曲： 第一步：材料的积累，相关的词语、短语或句型 描写自然景观的形容词，如：ancient, modern; interesting, fantastic,great, exciting等。 句型的运用： 事实性描述的表达，如： Victoria Falls is about 1,700 metres wide and 100 metres high. Terracotta Army is more than 2,000 years old. 表达个人观点和感受的句子，如： I think natural wonders are more interesting than man-made ones. In my opinion, it is huge and fantastic. 第二步：试一试，练一练 写作要求:上个星期天你和你的几个朋友一起游览了世界奇观之一的中国长城。请根据以下提供的信息写一篇游记。词数70左右。 乘公共汽车很早就到达了长城脚下。 站在长城上，感到很激动。 游客众多，来自世界各地。 观察到长城大约有4-5米宽，能供五匹马或十个人并排走过。 惊叹中国人的创造力，并为此而骄傲。 第三步：课外佳作欣赏 1. Mount Tai is one of the most famous mountains in China. It is in the middle of Shangdong Province. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners visit it. It’s not far from here. It takes you about two hours to get there from the centre of the city by bus. You can also go there by train. Autumn is the best season to climb Mount Tai. On the top of the mountain, you can enjoy the beautiful sunrise. And the sunrise is wonderful. Mount Tai is really a nice place to visit. 2. Dear Tony, I had a wonderful trip to Guilin with my parents this summer holiday. It is a small city in the northeast of Guangxi. It is more than 2,000 years old and the whole city is about 27,800 square kilometers. There are green mountains, clear waters, unique caves and beautiful stones there. The most famous tourist attractions are Elephant Trunk Hill象鼻山, Li River漓江, Reed Flute Cave 芦笛岩and Seven-star Park七星公园. Elephant Trunk Hill is the symbol象征 of the city. It is really a fantastic hill. It looks like a huge elephant drinking water by the Li River! Ask your parents to bring you to Guilin next time. You can go there by air, by train or by bus and get around on free buses in the city. If you go, I can go with you. I would like to visit it again! I am sure we will have a great time there. Yours,