英语医学科研论文写作.pptVIP

? “ 英夫利昔单抗在 IBD 的治疗中已经充分显示了其优越性和 安全性” ? Infliximab has fully demonstrated its superiority and security in the treatment of inflammatory bowel disease (IBD). → Infliximab has shown its efficacy and safety in the treatment of inflammatory bowel disease (IBD). 分析：用词不当；“充分显示”没必要直译 ? 3a( 注：一种新型生物素靶向显影探针 ) 能通过生物素介导 专一靶向乳腺癌细胞，成像清晰，对正常乳腺细胞毒性极 低。 3a can be well oriented to breast cancer cells via biotin, the imaging performance of 3a is satisfied, and was nontoxic to normal breast cells. → 3a is capable of targeted delivery to breast cancer cells via biotin to achieve enhanced imaging performance without toxicity to normal breast cells. ? 分析：“靶向”译作 orient 不好，文献中普遍用 target ； Satisitifed 一词有误；最后一个分句主语在哪？ ? 高龄冠心病患者行非体外循环下冠脉旁路移植术是一种安 全有效的手术方法，远期效果满意。 ? Off-pump coronary artery bypass grafting was a safe and effective operation for patients in advanced age, it has a satisfying long-term outcomes. → Off-pump coronary artery bypass grafting is safe and effective and can achieve favorable long-term outcomes in elderly patients with coronary artery disease . 分析： 老龄患者用 elderly 好些，简单且有尊敬之意；原译中 未体现“冠心病患者”；还是 satisfy 的问题；第二个分句 前缺少连词；时态问题：宜用一般现在时态 Features of Chinglish: at the discourse level ? 篇章层面的中式英语主要体现在段落安排上， 没有按照英文习惯的先重后轻的顺序 ? 段落中首句不是段落的中心句 ? （引言中）使用中文的套话 : with the development of the society/ economy This study provides a useful tool to further study of sth. This technique is worth wide clinical application. The Fundamentals of Medical Writing — Anatomy of a medical paper — Key elements in writing each section 医学论文的基本结构 ? Title ? Authors and Affiliations ? Abstract ? Introduction ? Materials and Methods ? Results ? Discussion ? Acknowledgement ? References Title Abstract Introduction Materials and Methods Results Discussion 论文各部分写作要点 TITLE: give your article a snappy title Elements of a good title 好的标题的要素 ? Easy to understand 易懂 ? Accurate promise of the papers content 准确反映文章内容 ? Specific concerning the scope of the study 足够具体 ? No unexplained abbreviations