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英译汉过程中的问题浅析 -以英教两班26篇翻译和校对为例 口一、语序调换 口二、语言通顺 口三、精确性 口四、语言的优美度 中文语序 语序调换 和英文语 序的不同 D Word of the car crash reached Balmy all Scotland at one o clock in the morning of August 31 1997. Word of the death came through at four. Prince Charles was in residence. with his sons 口一九九七年八月三十一号早上一点钟,车祸的消息传到 了苏格兰的巴尔莫勒堡。四点钟,戴安娜王妃的死讯传 来了。查尔斯王子此时正和儿子们在住所里。 ]车祸的消息于一九九七年八月三十一号凌晨一点传到苏 格兰巴尔莫勒堡。戴安娜王妃的死讯于四点传来。当时 查尔斯王子和儿子们就住在这里。 a Many of the Kings advisers and members of Parliament were in favor of giving the colonies more freedom and self-government and lifting the harsh taxes that had been imposed on them 口许多国王的顾和国会的成员曾赞成给殖民地更多的自 由和自我管理并且取消强加去他们身上的苛刻税收。 口国王的顾问和国会的成员中很多人都赞成给殖民地更多 的自由和自治并且取消强加在他们身上的苛刻税收。 适当地调换 反例 语序以突出 重点来和原 意相一致 a So we should be grateful for inanity and despotism for resulting in the U.S. A. Ergo, insanity and despotism are good things, just as capital punishment IS 口因此我们要感激这导致了美国的诞生的疯狂和专制。所 以,就像死刑一样,疯狂和专制是好东西 口我们应当要感激这导致了美国的诞生的疯狂和专制。因 此,疯狂和专制是好东西,死刑也同样如此。 二、语言通顺 a She was born in bondage and with a dark skin and most of her early maturity was passed in a dark and tragic time for she had not caused; she assumed cares and griefs which the land of her birth she went through vicissitudes which vere not even her cares and griefs. she was paid wages for this, but pay is still just money. 不是她自己的忧 伤。别人因此付她上钱,可付给的只是钱而芑 口黑皮肤的她生来就是被奴役的命。早年在她在出生地历尽了黑暗 久夏全不属于自己的和痛苦她因此得到些报酬,但报酬又 a we make considered decisions 口我们深思熟虑做决定, 口我们做出深思熟忐的决定。 a The ocean acts as the earth s buffer. 注意中文语法 口海洋扮演着地球缓冲器的作用, 口海洋起到了地球缓冲器的作用。 a Money-laundering has been one of the world,d astest-growing world s financial authorities to stamp it ov easing eforts by the industries over the past decade despite it 口尽管世界金融机构不断加大对洗钱活动的打击,但在过去的十年里,洗钱活 动已成为发展最迅速 篝黠是金對類忑甑趣过活动的打击力度,但在过去的十年里,洗 DAfrozen brain for example requires only half as much oxygen as one with a normal body temperature of 98.6 Fahrenheit 口一个“冷冻”的大脑只需人脑在华氏986度的正常体温下所需要的氧气量的 ◇个“会床”的大脑所需的氧气量是人脑在华氏986度的正常体温下所需要 a It is normally, but not necessarily,