官方指南雅思范文(完整大作文附赠部分解析).pdfVIP

Test 1 Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 1. For most people, when they get their first job they have little idea whether or not they will remain in the same organisation throughout their working life. 2. If they decide to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall. 注意开头段写法，说明背景句+观点的方式已经被雅思官方认可，而且一般就两句话。 但是这两句话作者并不是随意的简单同意替换，句型上来说一定要丰富。比如作者用了一个用 了一个时间状语从句+一个条件状语从句。 平时在行文练习中，一定要注意开头段的长句子输出，如果大家无法用一个句子说清楚背景， 可以用两个句子，介绍背景加题目观点。 另外一个句子来表达自己观点。 从现在官方范文来看，几乎所有开头段都表达了作者的观点。 3. People who stay with the same organisation will have the advantage of a thoroughly understanding how it works and also becoming familiar with the staff and processes. 4. If they work hard, their promotion prospects are good and there is likely to be greater job security with a promise of a good pension when they retire. 5. Employers value loyalty and may offer additional incentives to long-term employees, including bonuses and reward schemes. 第3 句，中心句，表达长期从事一份工作的主要好处 第4 句，中心句的拓展，解释在长期工作的情况下，如果工作努力，又会得到什么好处 第5 句，解释雇主对忠心员工提供的好处, including 的用法一定要学会别动不动就such as 很多同学一遇到稍微抽象的问题，就不知道该怎么拓展了。动不动就for example 了，其实这是 下策。本段就为大家做了一个如何的拓展示例：从多角度看问题——横向、纵向、时间维度、 地域维度、主观客观等等 这样去思考拓展，就很明显了： 第一句的好处其实是主观好处，针对本人的；第二句的好处是时间维度的；第三句的好处是客 观，是从雇主提供的。以此类推，就不愁没有写的。 6. However, one of the drawbacks of staying with the same organisations is that the person may get stuck doing the same job year after year. 7. In some cases, this can lead to boredom and disillusionment. 8. Moving from one organisation to another can be a strategic decision in order to have variety and acquire a range of skills and experience. 9. A friend of my father started out as a sociology teacher, he then joined the Social Services and