第一讲写出语法正确,形式多样的句子讲课教案.docxVIP

第一讲 写出语 法 正确 ,形式多样的句子 各位同学； 欢迎参加基于建构主义的交互式写作与评阅实验课。在这一门课里，我们 将通过网上写作--交互评阅--自我反思的过程，从词句到段落再到篇章进行议论 文写作训练。该实验课为每周二晚 7:30-9:00实验楼109。 第一讲写出语法正确，形式多样的句子 1.1常见句子错误分析 I逗号连接两个独立的句子 -■ I like sports, they can improve my health. 改为:I like sports. They can improve my health. 或:I like sports; they can improve my health. 或:I like sports because they can improve my health. 或:I like sports which can improve my health. 或:I like sports and they can improve my health roommate is so troublesome, I can hardly put up with him any more. 改为:My roommate is so troublesome that I can hardly put up with him any more