应用文写作课件2.doc

作文评改 You stayed with a local family when you attended a training program. Write a letter to the family, thanking them for their hospitality. 第一步：审题（有人写偏了） 第二步：按照模板写作 第三步：检查文章 Sample: Dear Sam, I’m writing this letter to express my gratitude for your entertainment during my stay in your house. Last month, I came to your city for a training program. When I was troubled by the problem of board and lodging, you came to help me out and offered me a room in your family. I had a great time while staying at your cozy home. The room was clean and tidy so that I could have a good sleep everyday. The food your wife prepared for me was very delicious. And playing with your lovely and smart son really gave me a lot of fun. This wonderful memory will always be engraved in my mind. Please accept my thanks again. I hope I will have an opportunity to repay your kindness some day. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 错误句子： I am writing to extend my sincere for your family taking good care of me. When I woke up, a nurse told me that you looked after by your carefully in this period. You have given a lot time to me for make me happy. You not only save my money, but also take me know… Everyday you prepared rich food for me that make me feel delicious and happy. She is a good cooker. … your taking good care of me during my attend a training program. I thought I would dead. Dear you, Dear Sir: I was involved in a warm family. You not only offered me delicious meals but give me a warm room to live. The room was so bright that I have never seen before. 4)申请信 求职申请：自我介绍，说明写信目的→展示个人能力、经历以及求职动机→希望面试机会，表示感谢。 注意：由于篇幅较短，而申请者需要尽可能地向用人单位推销自己，所以在求职信中最好笼统概说自己的求学和工作经历，突出一个到两个吸引眼球的闪光点即可。 模板句型： 第一部分：说明写信目的： I am writing in response to your advertisement in … I am writing this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in… I am writing to express my interest in your recently adv