高--中学习英语写作扩句.docVIP

扩句的方法 在学习扩句法之前， 先对学生进行五个简单句句型， 并列 句和复合句的专项训练，打好基础。扩句是在基本句型的基 础上，添 加各种修饰成分 ，使句子得到扩展，即根据表达的 需求 增加定语，状语，同位语等成分 ，或者 举例子补充细节 内容，或者 添加谚语俗语 等。 1. We arrived in Sanya. ----- We arrived in Sanya, happily and excitedly. ( 添加副词 ) 2 2. I like to make friends with my classmates. ------ I like to make friends with my classmates, who have the same interest as mine. ( 添加定语从句 ) 3. We were happy and returned home. ------- We were happy and returned home after we had finished collecting all the rubbish.( 添加状语从句 ) 4 4. I like reading books. ------- I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers.( 通过举例补充细节 ) 5 5. We should study hard. -------- As we all know, “Practice makes perfect ”. So we should study hard. （添加谚语） 6. I often join in many activities. -------- I often join in many activities to communicate with other students  in order and broaden my mind. (  添加目的状语  ) 三．  具体应用 试题要求：假如你是一名中学生，请以 My colorful school life 为题，写一篇短文。要求 100个字左右。开头和 结尾已经 给出，不计入总数。 要点提示： 1：上课认真听讲 2 ：课后完成作业 3 ：经常参加体育锻炼 4 ：去图书馆阅读 I ’m a high school student and I understand what I ’m studying for. I have been working hard. ___________________________________________________ ____________________________ May there always be colorful  life  around  my school. 学生的习作： I ’m a high school student and I understand what I ’m studying for. I have been working hard. I listen to the teacher carefully. my homework after class. I often take exercise. read in the school library. May there always be colorful life  I finish I often around my school. 点评：该学生能完整的写出各个要点， 没有出现太大的语法错误，表达通顺，单词拼写无误。但是很明显字数不够， 没有达到 100个字左右，字数不够是很多学生面临的共同问题。其次，句子的表达过于平淡无奇，没有句式多样化和使用高级词汇，固定搭配、固定短语等使表达地道。而且，没有使用连接词，上下文的连接不够顺畅。 改进方法： 步骤一：列要点 把要写的内容要点化，做到要点齐全。 Listen to the teacher carefully finish my homework 3:take part in exercise 4: often read in the library 步骤二：造简单句 充分利用五个简单句句型对各个要点进行补充，使 其变成一个完整的句子。 每个句子都要注意句子成分的完整 性，语法是否正确，说法是否符合英语表达习惯。 1: I listen to the teacher carefully in the class. 2: I fin