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读后续写高分作文的写作方法指导
(以衡水中学四月联考英语作文为例)
2020
江苏省丰县中学上课讲义
正文指导
版本一:
But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.
But
no
more
helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
The ceiling of thick
branches shut out
the
sky
and
covered
the path
in
darkness.
Jane
looked
around
blankly,
a shiver of alarm
going through her. Soon the full moon rose, large, round and clear, shining in the deep blue.
“ Why
not
pick
stones
from
the
stream
and
make
them
in
the
form
of
SOS?”
cried Jane excitedly, determined to save herself independently. Having finished it, she felt
so exhausted and slept beside the stones. Tomorrow will be another day.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
Birds were chirping, the branches swaying to the
rhythm
of the
wind,
and
the leaves
fluttering
like
graceful
butterflies.
A
ray
of
hope
rose
naturally in her heart. Suddenly, the buzzing of the helicopter came overhead again. It did
saw
her
waving yellow
blouse and
most
important
the
SOS.
Upon
its
landing,
so
thrilled
was
she
that
she
threw
herself
at Tom and
hugged
him tightly,
tears
of
joy
welling
up in
their eyes.
“ I miss you so much. Have you found the spot?
”
“ Yes, in our heart.
”
版本二:
But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it was
getting
dark
again.
The
trees
cracked
and
groaned in the dark. A thrill of alarm came through Jane. Eventually, she determined on spotting
an open
area,
awaiting another
helicopter.
She stumbled
her
way
through
the horrible
forests
and climbed to a high place. No time to waste. After she flagged her yellow blouse, Jane sank to
the ground, anguished and defeated. Gazing at the sky, Jane recalled Tom and tears blurred her
eyes. Terrified as she was, she fell fast asleep in the wild.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
And, as luck would have it, a helicopter just came by!
Jane yelled and skipped, waving her yellow blouse. To her great joy, the helicopter noticed her
and landed. What astounded her most was that it was Tom who sat in the helicopter! Out rushed
Tom. A hu
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