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写作规范练(一) (限时：35分钟) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 [2019·长春市质量监测]My close friend Sunny has curly yellow hair and she cheered me up when I am down. I remember the day which I first met her. It was snowing and freezing cold. I found a little dirty dog by the road trembled under the bush. I stopped to wait for quite a while and there was no sign of her owner. When she looked into my eyes, her heart melted. I gentle held her and took her back home. I gave her a warm bathe and fed her some milk and soon she was recovered. Sunny is pleasant surprise for me and my family and I take good care for her every day. 答案与解析： My close friend Sunny has curly yellow hair and she eq \o(cheered,\s\do14(①cheers)) me up when I am down. I remember the day eq \o(which,\s\do14(②when)) I first met her. It was snowing and freezing cold. I found a little dirty dog by the road eq \o(trembled,\s\do14(③trembling)) under the bush. I stopped to wait for quite a while eq \o(and,\s\do14(④but)) there was no sign of her owner. When she looked into my eyes, eq \o(her,\s\do14(⑤my)) heart melted. I eq \o(gentle,\s\do14(⑥gently)) held her and took her back home. I gave her a warm eq \o(bathe,\s\do14(⑦bath)) and fed her some milk and soon she was recovered. Sunny is eq \o(∧,\s\do14(⑨a)) pleasant surprise for me and my family and I take good care eq \o(for,\s\do14(⑩of)) her every day. ①cheered改为cheers　考查时态。此处叙述作者当前的情况，因此这里谓语动词应该用一般现在时。 ②which改为when　考查关系词。分析句子结构可知，此处引导定语从句修饰名词the day并在从句中作时间状语，故应该用when引导该从句。 ③trembled改为trembling　考查非谓语动词。句中动词tremble与谓语动词之间没有连词，应用其非谓语动词形式，且该动词与其逻辑主语a little dirty dog为主谓关系，故用其现在分词形式。 ④and改为but　考查连词。“我”停下来等了好大一会儿，但是没有她主人的影子。根据句意可知，这里应该用并列连词but表示转折含义。 ⑤her改为my　考查代词。根据语境可知，此处表示“我”看到这幕情景时的心情，应该用my而不是her。 ⑥gentle改为gently　考查副词。修饰动词应用副词，故用gently。 ⑦bathe改为bath　考查名词