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一、 作文开头
万能句
1、With the development of technology and science, 随着科学技术的发展(后
面一定要接句子,不能单独使用)
With the growth \progress of technology and science= Coincident with the
advancement of science and technology.
2 、Considering the worsening situation in China, attention must be poured into
protecting the environment.( 考虑到中国越来越坏的情况,环境保护需要引起更
多的重视。 )
3 、The first five years of the new century witnessed the increasing development
of China.( 本世纪的头五年见证了中国的快速发展。 ) As the global economy
grows at a fever pitch, ……
4 、Coincident with the fast growing national economy, there exists an
unfavorable and prevalent phenomenon in China.
5 、There are growing concern for ……
6 、 hear that ……
7 、There is a general tendency that (有一种趋势)……
二、 作文内容的陈述
结构 in the first place/ secondly/ on top of that
以下手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的 亮点“ ”。
1.改变句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再
加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。
〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the
morning.
〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there
together.
〔原文〕The young man couldn ’t help crying when he heard the bad news.
〔修正〕Hearing the bad news , the young man couldn ’t help crying.
2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主
从复合句、分词状语等。
①强调句
〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.
〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.
It was yesterday that I met him in the street.
②由 with 或 without 引导的短语。如 :
He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
③分词短语。如 :
Satisfied with the result ,He decided to go on with a new experiment.
④倒装句。如 :
Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.
Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent
person.
⑤省略句。如 :
If so ,victory will be ours.
You can make some changes wherever necessary.
3.通过分句和合句,
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