初中英语写作专题课.pptVIP

2.主谓一致问题（句子改错） ? Everything are going very well. ? David with his little brother go to the park every Sunday. ? There are a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. Everything is going very well. David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday. There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. 第二十九页，编辑于星期二：一点 七分。 3.时态和语态问题（句子改错） 1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy. 2. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in the park. Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy. On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in the park. 第三十页，编辑于星期二：一点 七分。 4.Chinglish 现象（句子改错） 1. Last Sunday, Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake. 2. I and my classmates by bus to Changzhi. Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother.There was a lake in the park. My classmates and I took a bus to Changzhi. 第三十一页，编辑于星期二：一点 七分。 5.行文的逻辑性问题 1. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter with her mother’s help. 2. But she wasn’t careful, so that she fell into the river. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter . She wasn’t careful, and she fell into the river. 第三十二页，编辑于星期二：一点 七分。 6.词类错用 1.When I was sadly, I played with it. When I was happily, I played with it.