高考英语作文的润色与提高宋武栋老师.pptxVIP

会计学;专题一：优秀作文的基本特征;优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征;层次不乱;句式多变;亮点若干;巧妙串联;蠢错不犯：;整洁卷面;第9页/共42页;第10页/共42页;第11页/共42页;第12页/共42页;专题二 肃清基础语言错误;中学生英语写作中常见的14种语言错误：;2.时态、语态混用;3.句子成分残缺;4.习惯搭配误用;5.名词单、复数不分;6.动词单、复数不分;7.赘词现象多发;8.近义词的误用;9.基本词汇拼写错误;10.前后人称不一致;11.动词原形作主语/宾语;12.逻辑主语与主句主语不一致;13.一个简单句出现两个谓语;14.中式英语;有则改之，无则加勉； 用心则易，无心则难。;专题三：第一反应与克制第一反应;他是个好人。;对不起，我不能和你一起去北京了。;适应;专题四：打动人心的句型 和 打翻人胃的句型 ;第34页/共42页;存点钱是很重要的。;审题： “十年后的我” --- “感性的、充满想象的” 切忌：套用了太多所谓的“万能句式” ，破坏了这种“感性”，使之变得“太理性”、“太刚”了： （1）运用了大量的表示顺序的词句(太过理性)： Firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally; To start with；Last but not least; My future life is as follows. ;（2）运用了大量的表达强烈观点句式（语气太刚）： I hold the point of view that There is no doubt that … I strongly believe that … I am firmly convinced that (there will be exciting and wonderful changes in …/it gives me a strong body) It goes without saying that … What I want to stress is that (health is very important to us);（3）运用了大量的总结、转换、强调、转折等语气、句式，不够得体。 All in all, … / Generally speaking, As a matter of fact, As for my spare time, … As far as I am concerned, I hope become a doctor. When it comes to my own family, it occurs to me that I will have 2 children. It is known to us that family is the most important thing in our life. On the one hand, … on the other hand… ;（4）运用了大量的强调句和倒装句，给人非常生涩的感觉。 In my spare time, so active am I that I will go fishing with my family. It is after ten years that… （5）在同一篇短文里，堆砌了大量同样的句式： It’s I that want to be a teacher; It is I that am fond on children. It is I that like making a lot of friends. It is famous city that I’ll go to… （6）中式英语，意思相差较大,或完全不达意。 Lover Organize a family I hope my will be little speak English. ;那些能稍微充满想象的句子，就显得难能可贵： …My two sons surrounding me smile like sunshine. …On weekends, I will take my family to the beach to have a rest, enjoying the sun rises. … go out for a picnic, hugging the natu