高中英语课件：作文讲评.pptx

1. 格式错误 2. 开头没有空两格 3. 分太多段 4. 字数太多，超过100词;Dear James, Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Yours, Li Hua ;Dear James, Knowing that you’re feeling upset since you can’t adapt to your new life, I’m writing to share with you my suggestions. Actually it’s normal and natural to feel frustrated while in an extremely new surrounding. I can understand how you feel. First of all, it’s a good idea to ask your teachers or classmates for help. Additionally, I strongly recommend that you should take part in various school activities, which will surely enable you to make more friends. I do hope my advice can be of some help and you will cheer up soon! Yours, Li Hua ;感到沮丧： feel frustrated feel down be depressed be in low spirits with dismay 灰心，丧气 discouraged ;advice + supporting idea ; advice + supporting idea ;语言积累：适应新环境的建议