Part Ⅴ　Writing——体育故事（（新教材）外研版英语必修第二册同步学案(讲义)Unit 3 On the move (共)）.docxVIP

Part Ⅴ　Writing——体育故事 故事重点在写事，而不在写人。但是，故事应以人为主题，讲述发生在人物身上的感人故事。故事应具有激励性，充满正能量，给人以启发，催人奋进，积极向上。语言具有趣味性，耐人寻味，同时，精炼、言简意赅。 【增分表达】 1.one of the best athletes in our country 2.He is good at... 3.He is even the most capable...in the world. 4.keep the best record of...until now. 5.I find myself full of passion in my heart. 6.He is the best example of making every effort to develop his sport career and break so many records. 7.This spirit is worthy to be learned by all of us. 8.With this ambition，he could defeat any difficulties. 9.Facing difficulties，he never loses heart. 10.make more progress... 请用英语写一篇自己所经历的体育故事。内容要点如下： 1.我是山东人。 2.学校游泳队队员。 3.从小就喜欢游泳，在学校里认真学习，放学后认真训练；经过努力取得了一系列的成绩。 4.我认为…… 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第一步：布局谋篇很关键 ?审题 1.确定体裁： 本文为记叙文； 2.确定中心人称：本文主要为第一人称； 3.确定主题时态：一般现在时或过去时。 ?构思 第一部分：简要介绍自己。 第二部分：自己的故事。 第三部分：对体育运动的认识和对未来的期许。 第二步：核心词汇想周全 1.a member of...　　　　是……的一员 2.win a gold medal 赢得一枚金牌 3.become a champion 成为冠军 4.get great achievements 获得巨大成就 5.lose heart 失去信心 6.advise sb to do sth 建议某人做某事 第三步：由词扩句雏形现 1.I am a member of school swimming team. 我是学校游泳队的队员。 2.I loved swimming when I was a small boy. 我小的时候喜欢游泳。 3.I have got great achievements. 我已经取得了巨大成就。 4.I never give up training.我从来不放弃训练。 5.I meet difficulties.我遇到困难。 6.I never lose heart.我从来不灰心丧气。 第四步：句型升级造亮点 1.将句2改成一个含有since状语从句的句子。 I have been loving swimming since I was a small boy. 2.将句3和句4合并成含有though引导让步状语从句的句子。 Though I have got great achievements，I never give up training. 3.将句5和句6合并成主从复合句。 Whenever I meet difficulties，I never lose heart. 第五步：过渡衔接连成篇 I am from Shandong，a member of the school swimming team.I am 198cm in height.I have been loving swimming since I was a small boy.At 7 I became a member of the school swimming team.Five years later，I won a gold medal at the County Swimming Championship and became a champion at the National Swimming Championships later.Though I have got great achievements，I never give up training.One day I i