人教七年级下册英语记叙文(叙事)写作(共29张PPT).pptVIP

Last week, I went to the theatre. I had a very good seat. The play was very interesting. I did not enjoy it. A young man and a young woman were sitting behind me. They were talking loudly. I got very angry. I could not hear the actors. I turned round. I looked at the man and the woman angrily. They did not pay any attention. In the end, I could not bear it. I turned round again. I cant hear a word! I said angrily. Its none of your business, the young man said rudely. This is a private conversation! 1.where did the writer go ? 2.when did the writer go to the place? 3.what did the writer do there? 4.Did he enjoy the play? Why or Why not? 叙事记叙文写作 主要特点：记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明 请以“A Visit to a Farm”为题，根据提示写一次愉快的参观． 提示：１．今天早上你和你的同学在校门口集合，一起做车去参观了一家农场． 　　　 ２．在农场里你们野炊，唱歌跳舞，下棋，说笑话，讲故事，玩的非常高兴． 　　　 ３．结尾已给出. 要求：１．可围绕主题适当发挥，但应包含所给要点． 　　　 ２．词数60左右，所给结尾不记入总数． …The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers. 一、审题: 确定基本要素:5W1H 何 何 何 为 如 何 时 地 人 何 何 事 When: _______ Who :_______ Where : _______ What: _______ 　　 Why: _______ 　 How: _______ Tense: The simple past tense. Today We Farm Visit Play Bus 二、抓要点 确定主要行为 What happened? Key points： met ··· bus 　　 visited a farm　　　 　　　　　 　 　　　　　played chess danced ···sang　　 　told jokes ···stories had a picnic 关键词： 动词 三、扩展成句 形成基本语义单位 Who did what? 常用连词: and、so/because、although/but however、not only···but also Who: met ···bus 　　　 visited a farm　　　 　　　　　 　 　　　played chess danced···sang　　 　 told jokes ···stories had a picnic 四、 连句成文 词与词搭配 　　句与句相连 增加细节 呼应首尾 顺序: time order 注意: 简单句、复合句 　　　　　　　　　五、 查错改错 时态是否正确 主谓是否一致 要点是否全面 人称是否正确 语序问题 是否符合语言习惯　 固定短语 We visited the farm today. Early in the morning we went there together by buses. The farm workers welcomed us. Then the head o