高中英语教学课件：secret of happiness续写.pptx

Continuation Writing ;读后续写： 提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生一句材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）;读后续写评分原则 本题总分为25 分，按5 个档次给分。 第五档（21-25） ----与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。 ----内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 ---所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。 ---有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。;Step 1. Read for basic information Tone（情节基调） A merchant sent his son to learn?the secret of happiness?from the wisest of men. ;Step 1. Read for basic information;The gist of the story Plot: A merchant had his son learn the ___ of _____ from a wise man.The son reached the _____ where the man lived. However the wise man told him nothing about what was the secret of happiness.Instead,he ______ the young man walk around his castle carrying a ______ with two ______ of oil and while walking he should not let the oil spill.The young man did _____ he was asked to. The oil didn’t spill,but he missed all the surrounding ______.So the wise man asked the hero to go back enjoy the beautiful things. ;Step 2. Predict possible plot(情节)development ;Step 2. Predict possible plot(情节)development ;Step 3. To be consistent（融合一致）and coherent;1.List the verbs that the writer uses to describe the hero-the young man.;3. Use proper transitional words Add some details ;Echo（头尾呼应）;Step 4. Draft a continuation writing;Step 5 Polish your writing;Homework: Finish the writing and polish it yourself before handing it in.