高中英语课件：专题12续写典例LoveChangeLife.pptx

专题13新高考英语读后续写典例分析13新高考英语LoveChangeLife

目录01表达积累02原文分析03续写扩展04续写赏析

01表达积累

表达积累1.他的衣服很乱2.有他在身边真是件乐事3.泰迪很孤僻4.她的声音因泪水而哽咽5.山顶被积雪覆盖hisclothesweremessyheisajoytobearoundTeddyiswithdrawnhervoicechokedupwithtearsThemountaintopwascoveredwithsnow.

表达积累6.这个地区杳无人烟7.沐浴在阳光下8.沿着一条蜿蜒的小道爬9.山上的一处避难所10.茂密的丛林 TheregionisuninhabitedBathedinthesunshineclimbedupawindingtrackamountainrefugeindensejungle

表达积累11.薄雾涣然消散了12.云层遮住了太阳13.微风有了些凉意14.太阳正高挂在南边的天空15.云彩扩散开来 ThemistmeltedrapidlyThesunwentinthebreezebecamecoldThesunwasnowhighinthesouthernsky.Thecloudshadspread

表达积累16.乌云密布17.芬芳的玫瑰18.娇嫩的花19.雷霆万钧的云20.鸟鸣Darkcloudsweregatheringintheskythefragrantrosesthefragileflowersthethunderingcloudsthesongsofbirds

02原文分析

LoveChangeLifeHernamewasMrs.Thompson.Andasshestoodinfrontofthe5thgradeclassontheveryfirstdayshelookedatherstudentsandsaidthatshelovedthemallthesame.ButthatwasimpossiblebecausethereinthefrontrowwasalittleboynamedTeddyStoddard.Mrs.ThompsonhadwatchedTeddytheyearbeforeandnoticedthathedidntplaywellwiththeotherchildren,thathisclothesweremessyandthatheconstantlyneededabath.ShepaidnoattentiontoTeddy.原文分析Mrs.Thompson不是特别喜欢Teddy

However,whenshereadhisfile,shewasinsurprise.Teddysfirstgradeteacherwrote,Teddyisabrightchildwithareadylaugh.Hedoeshisworkneatlyandhasgoodmanners...heisajoytobearound.Hissecondgradeteacherwrote,Teddyisanexcellentstudent,welllikedbyhisclassmates.Butheistroubledbecausehismotherhasadeadlyillnessandlifeathomemustbeastruggle.Histhirdgradeteacherwrote,Hismothersdeathhasbeenhardonhim.原文分析看了Teddy之前老师的评价，Mrs.Thompson很吃惊

Hetriedtodohisbestbuthisfatherdoesntshowmuchinterest.Teddysfourthgradeteacherwrote,Teddyiswithdrawnanddoesntshowmuchinterestinschool.Hedoesnthavemanyfriendsandsometimessleepsinclass.