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BEC商务英语（高级）写作模拟试卷81(题后含答案及解析)

题型有：1.PARTONE2.PARTTWO

PARTONE

1．Thegraphbelowshowspassengerrevenue(n￡m)andthepercentageof

transarrvngontmeforatrancompany,Cruselne,foreachquarterofatwo-year

perod,2005-2006.Usngthenformatonfromthegraph,wrteashortreport

descrbngthepassengerrevenueandthepercentageoftransarrvngontmedurng

thetwo-yearperod.Wrte120-140words.

正确答案：SampleAThefollowngreportwlldescrbethechangesnthe

passengerrevenueandthepercentageoftransarrvngontme.Forboth1stand2nd

quarterthepassengerrevenuehasncreasedncomparsonwthlastyearresults.The

lasttwoquarters’passengerrevenueshavedecreaseddrastcally,resultngnlessthan

25%oftheorgnalrevenue.Aswecanobservethepunctualtyofthetranshasfallen

down.In2005tddnotgounder85%whlen2006tfelltolessthan70%.Quarter

byquarterthepunctualtysworstn2006thenn2005.Wecanapprecatethe

reductonofarrvngontmeobservngthe3rdquarterresults.In2005thecompany

hadtsworstresult(85%)andatthesameperodof2006tfelldownto69%.In

concluson,thepercentageoftransarrvnglatehasncreasedandthepassenger

revenuerosefrsttoendupfallng.Band1Thsscrpthasnotablecontentomssons.

Fromthefrstparagraph,tsmpossibletovsualsethebarchartforpassenger

revenue.Inaddton,theconfusoncausedbythesecondparagraphhasavery

negatveeffectonthetargetreader.SampleBReport:CruselnetrancompanyThe

graphshowsthepassengerrevenueandthepercentageoftransarrvngontme

durngtheyears2005and2006ofatrancompanycalledCruselne.Regardngthe

passengerrevenuedurng2005t