写作微技能：very的高级替身+课件-2024届高三下学期英语作文复习专项.pptxVIP

23.5分_恩施高中_陈博文这是2024年5月17日宜荆荆随恩联考，恩施高中续写最高分。书写虽然接近衡水体，但明显不是最好的。除了故事完整、合乎逻辑外，词汇量大、句式高级是该生最明显的优势所在。尽管有一些语言错误，也成功被掩盖，得到高分！下面以高级副词为例，来分析、学习一下该生的语言特色。Example1：Theoverwhelminganxietyandunsettlement_________(不知不觉地)spreadtoeveryonetrappedinthecar,actingasahurricanethatcamecrushingontousandwhirledeveryoneintoannoyance.unknowinglyExample2：Whatsworse,withthefaintlight__________(最终)failedandplungedthewholecarintodarknessandhopelessness,andtheairwasgetting____________(压迫地)hotandstuffy.eventuallyoppressivelyExample3：Asacommuterwhotraveledtoworkonthetraineveryday,Ithoughtitmydutytodosomething.Then,withouthesitation,Istoodupandexclaimed________tomakemyvoiceheard_______,“Keepcalmplease!Itsnousecomplainingandbeinganxious.”loudlyclearlyExample4：____________(神奇地),myconfirmingwords__________(立即)stoppedthechaos,someevenrespondingtomewiththeirapplause.MiraculouslyimmediatelyExample5：Aseveryonewasburstingintocheers,broadsmilesbegantospreadontoourfaces__________________(几乎自发地)---we__________madeit.almostspontaneouslyfinallyExample6：Throwingaglanceatthegloomycar,Ifoundsomelingeringbackandforth____________(不耐烦地),somemurmuringandmoaning______________(不间断地),someevenknockingatthewindowtopourouttheirunbearablerage.unpatientlyrelentlessly写作微技能Very的高级替身对比下列两种表达：我的英语不好。许多同学会这样表达：MyEnglishisverybad/poor.可不可以改为：MyEnglishneedsimprovingbadly.你更喜欢哪一种呢？教你几个Very的高级替身.mp4代替very的高级词汇，非常成功，不要再说verysuccessful了，试试1.__________successful；非常重要，不要再说veryimportant了，试试2.__________important；非常便宜，不要再说verycheap，试试3.__________cheap；非常贵，不要再说veryexpensive，试试4.__________expensive；非常冷，不要再说verycold，试试5.__________cold。你学会了吗？highlyextremelyincrediblysurprisinglyterriblyMeiLanfang,oneofthemostfamousperformersofalltime,wasthefirst________(introduce)BeijingOperatoforeignersandmadehighlysuccessfult