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Wednesday考场作文研析Week15配套使用《满分微练》第一部分10分钟随堂微练15

读后续写满分技巧15长短句相间长句:在写句子时,在句内添加状语(副词、介词短语、非谓语动词或状语从句)、定语(形容词、非谓语动词或定语从句)、补语(形容词、非谓语动词)等附加成分,使短句变长句,更加流畅和自然。续写里有两三个长句就可以,与短句配合,形成长短句结合的节奏感。如:Ikickedthedoorhardanditbroke.扩充后:Withoutasecondthought(介词短语),Itookadeepbreathandkickedthedoorhard,whichbrokeopenwithaloudcrash(定语从句).结合小短句Idashedin.这样长短交错,有画面美,有节奏美。

好题探索阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2021·浙江卷改编)Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn’tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.Ididn’treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,andIthoughtthatIwouldsurpass(超过)anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimeIwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.③Summersinthemid?70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingformyfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone(长号).

ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.⑥Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedstospraywithchemicals.①Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpointedataweedwhichwemissed.②Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb’s?quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn’tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.Athome,mydadsaid,“Ajob’sabigsteptogrowingup.I’mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold.”Mydad’swordsmademerealizethatmyearningsmightnotbeminetodowitha