读后续写人和自然类海洋保护讲义-高三英语二轮复习写作专项.pdf

高考续写：爱护海洋

一、问题导读

1.文章有哪些可续写点，以便设置连接？

2.文章的冲突是什么？

3.文章的开展线和情感开展线是什么？

4.续写思路是什么？

二、续写题目

MariaandPeterlivedinacoastalcity.Thegreatestpleasureinsummerf

orthemwastoswimattheirlocalbeachafterschool.Butonedaytheystar

tedtolosetheirenthusiasmforswimminginthewaters.Moreoftenthann

ot,theywouldfindplasticbagsthrownonthebeach.Worsesill,astheys

waminthewater,someplasticbagswouldfloataroundthemandevenstic

ktotheirlegswhentheywalkedtotheshore.续写第一段拍视频和写文章

时，可再现海边脏乱差的场面。

Theywereupsetanddecidedsomethingneededtobedonetostopthebea

utifulseabeingconsumedbywaste.Oneweekend,MariaandPeterbroug

htabigbagtothebeachanddeterminedtocleanitup.续写其次段写

人们沙滩上捡垃捡塑料垃圾用bigbags装

Sweatstreameddownfromtheirforeheadwhiletheybentdownandpicked

uptheplasticbags.Totheirdisappointment,afteradayshardwork,there

werestillmanyplasticbagslyingonthebeachorfloatinginthewater.Goi

nghomewithachinglegsandarms,MariaandPeterwerealmostdefeatedb

yastrongsenseoffailure.续写第一段拍视频和写文章时，可再现海边脏

乱差的场面。

Thatnightoverdinnerwiththeirparents,thepairalesilently.

Noticingtheirlowspirits,Motheraskedgently,“Youtwolookedsodown.

Whathappened?〞

ExchangingglanceswithPeter,Mariarepliedinalowvoice,“Itsthose

annoyingplasticbags.Wetriedtocleanupbutitwasjustimpo

ssible.〞

Understandingthepairsdisappointment,theirfatherpattedthemonthe

backandforted,〞Well,itsreallyhardforjusttwoofyoutofixsucha

bigproblem.〞Justtwoofus.“〞

plainedMariaandPeter,lookingateachother.Suddenly,anidealashe

dthroughtheirminds,theireyesshining