cdd sec高级写作课作业复习2 writ.pptx

CDD/SEC

AdvancedWriting

Lesson3January2015

January2015AssignmentReviewLanguageFocusSamplesToday

AssignmentReview

AssignmentReviewLanguageSkills:Requestinginformation,givingsuggestions?Assignment:Youhavebeentoldbyyourbosstoarrangethescheduleofanotherseniormanager,Mr.Wang,foratriptoThailand.Unfortunatelyyourbossdoesnotknowthedetails,andyouhavenotwrittentoMr.Wangbefore.?YoumustwritetoMr.Wangtoaskhimaboutallthedetailspossible.Ideallyafterthisoneemail,youwillnotneedtoaskanymoreinformation.

AssignmentReviewKeyfocus:Youareaskingforalotofinformation,soyourgoalistobeclearandpolite,whilemakingyourbossunderstandthathisresponseneedstobelongerthannormal.Youmustalsomakesmartsuggestions,whileallowingroomforflexibility.Hints:Youmayaskabout(butnotlimitedto)thefollowingthings:dateshotelpreferencetransportationsuppliesarrangementsforothersspecialrequirementsThisemailshouldbelongerthan100words,butnolongerthan200words.

LanguageFocus

LanguageFocusKeywords:inform,advise,notice,provideCommonmisusage:Whenyouknowthedate,pleaseinformwithme.Pleaseadvisemeyourpreferredhotelroom.I’llnoticeourcolleaguesinThailand.Wouldyoupleaseprovidemesomeinformation?v.t.inform:e.g.informmewhenyouknow-tellme/letmeknow(advise:e.g.Pleaseadvisemeonwheretoshop.-v.t.notify(v.t.notice:toobservee.g.Didyounoticehernewhairstyle?)Toprovidesb.withsth.Toprovidesth.to/forsb.

LanguageFocusKeywords:intend(ed),plan(ned)

GoodtouseinsteadofdirectquestionWhenareyougoing?-Whatareyoubringing?-Whendoyouplantogo?Whatisyourintendeddeparturedate?Whatdoyouplantobring?Whatdoyouintendonbringing?

LanguageFocusKeywords:needvs.wouldlike/preferTo“need”somethingcansometimesappeardirect.-giveanimpressionofmodation.Whichhotelroomdoyouneed?-Doyou