高考英语复习读后续写感恩节做苹果派，但是孩子却把苹果酱瓶打碎了课件(共20张PPT).pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习

感恩节做苹果派，

但是孩子却把苹果酱瓶打碎了;

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题目呈现;

Inourkitchen,therewasawoodentableandthreechairs—oneforDad,oneforMom,and

oneforme.Inthecellar(地窖),theverylastjarofapplejamlayquietlyontheshelf,waitingtobeturnedintoanapplepiewhenDadcameback.Momsatatoneendofthetable.IsatinthemiddlebetweenherandDad.ItriednottolookatDadsemptyplace.Dadhadgonetothecitytolookforworkforalongtime.

Everynight,Ilayawakeinbedandwaitedforthetraintostop.Waitedtohearthecreaky(嘎吱作响的)gateDadsgoingtofixwhenhecamehome.Waitedtohearthesoundofhisworkbootsdroppingonthestepbythekitchendoor,andhisvoicecalling,“Imhome!”

Everynight,asIlaythere,IstaredatthewindowandthecurtainsMommadefromemptyfloursacks(麻布袋).;

Everynight,Momcametokissmegood-night—afterthetrainsgoneby.Shehadbeen

listening,too.“Gotosleep.Yourdadwillbehomesoon.MaybeforThanksgiving.”

Timedraggingby,itfinallycamethedaybeforeThanksgiving.Iwenttosleepwiththesoundoftrainwheelsinmyhead,whispering,“Maybetomorrow,maybetomorrow.”

Earlythenextmorning,thesmellofcoffeewokeme.Iranintothekitchen.Therehewas!Dadliftedmeontohisshouldersandpretendedtostaggerfrommyweight.“Howsmyboy?YouvegottensobigthatIcanbarelyliftyouupanymore.”

Heputmedown,andIstaredatthetwosacksonthetable.OnesaidFLOUR—Iknewthatword.Itriedreadingtheother:S-U-G-A-R.Dadwhistledadmiringlyandwinkedatme.MomandIhadbeenpracticingmylettersmostdays.IcouldseethatMomwaspleasedwithme.“Imgoingtobakeapieforyourdadshomecomingdinner.Jimmy,bringmethatjarofapplejamfromtheshelfinthecellar.”Momsmiledatme.;

Para1:Hearingthis,Itookthestepstwoatatimetothecellar.

Para2:“Nevermind,boy,accidentshappen,”Dadsaidandwipedmytears.;

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本篇书面表达是读后续写。所给文章为记叙文，以苹果酱和苹果派为线索。作者家

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