10. 投诉信——2025年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破 答案版.docx

10.投诉信——2025年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破

参考答案

【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】

1．DearSirorMadam,

Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwiththerecentpurchaseofbooksfromyourwebsite.

??Uponreceipt,Idiscoveredseveralbookswithtornpagesandmissingsections,renderingthemunusable.

Furthermore,someofthebookswerepricedhigherthaninphysicalbookstores.Irequestarefundforthedamagedbooksandapriceadjustmentfortheoverpriceditems.Additionally,pleaseensurethatqualitycontrolmeasuresareimplementedtopreventsuchissuesinfutureshipments.

Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给网店负责人写信投诉购买的书籍有破损、缺页及价格比实体书店还要贵的问题。

【解析】

1.词汇积累

不满：dissatisfaction→discontent

此外：Furthermore→Moreover

实体：physical→entity

注意力：attention→notice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Uponreceipt,Idiscoveredseveralbookswithtornpagesandmissingsections,renderingthemunusable.

As同义句：拓展句：AssoonasIreceivedthebooks,Idiscoveredseveralbookswithtornpagesandmissingsections,renderingthemunusable.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Uponreceipt,Idiscoveredseveralbookswithtornpagesandmissingsections,renderingthemunusable.(运用了现在分词作状语)

【高分句型2】Additionally,pleaseensurethatqualitycontrolmeasuresareimplementedtopreventsuchissuesinfutureshipments.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)

2．DearMr.Wang,

I’mastudentfromSenior3inourschoolandI’mquiteconcernedabouttheconditionofsomebooksinourschoollibrary,soI’mwritingtoyoutoseeifsomechangescouldbemade.

WhenIwasgoingthroughbooksonthesecondfloorinthelibrarylastweek,Ifoundsomeofthemwereterriblydamaged,whichhadpreventedmyfurtherreading.Therefore,I’mwonderingwhetheryoucouldrepairorsubstitutethebrokenbooksandalsoeducatethestudentstotakegoodcareofthebookswhenborrowingthem.

Ihopeyouwouldn’tfeeloffendedandsorryforanytroublethislettermightcauseandthattheproblemcouldbesolvedintime.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

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