【读后续写】 2021年11月湖丽衢高三联考读后续写讲评：Chicken Soup for the Soul Thanks Dad! 名师课件-陈星可 (1).pptx

20211105湖丽衢联考读后续写

WatchOverMe;;WatchingOverMe

ThereisnothingmorewonderfulthanthesmelloftheAdirondackair!Itfillsyourlungswithpurityandfreshnessthatmotivatesaloveforliving.Everyweekendinthesummer,myfatherwouldplanatripfromourhomeinupstateNewYorktooneofthesplendidlakesnestledamongthetallpinesandthickforestsoftheAdirondackMountains.Therewerenofavorites;instead,eachlakewasanadventuretoexploreandenjoy.

OnetripthatIwillneverforgetwasavisittoOneidaLakeatthefoothillsofthemountains.Afterarrivingatthelakebeacharea,weemptiedthecarofourpicnicsupplies,towels,blanketsandbeachchairs,carryingthemthroughawoodedpaththatseemedlikeaforeverdistance.Oncewelocatedtheperfectpicnicspot,mydad,sisterandIranintothesplashingwaveswithourbeachball,leavingmymotherbehindto“setup”.Inthelake,weimmediatelyplayed“monkeyinthemiddle”foratleastanhour,andthenafterretiringtheball,myfatherletusdivefromhisknee,throwingusupintheairandturningusoverlikethickpancakesonagrill.Thistimelessgamewentonandonasourbegging;for“more,more”neverstopped.

Whenwewerefinallytiredofourgames,mydadstoppedtowatchmyoldersister.Shelovedsynchronizedswimming(花样游泳)andstartedpracticingskillsthatherteamusedincompetition.Myfather,beinganathletehimself,wasabsorbedinhershow.Iwassadthatnoonewasplayingwithme;noonewaswatchingme.Ibecameboredandjealouswatchinghershowoff.Iwasinsulk(愠怒)anddecidedtoswimbymyselfandtrysomeofmysister’sskillsonmyownindeeperwater,farfrombothofthem.Thewavesweregettingstronger,butIdidntcare.IjustwantedtodowhatmysistercoulddosothatIcouldcatchmyfathersattention.

Paragraph1:AsItookabreathtotryadive,ahugewaveswallowedme.__________________________________________