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三、运用并列句常用的并列连词有and,but,or,otherwise,nor,so,yet,however,for,aswellas,both…and,notonly…butalso,either…or,neither…nor,andthen,since等。231【例7】他不喜欢音乐，也不喜欢运动。【一般】Hedoesn’tlikemusic.Hedoesn’tlikesports,either.【高级】Helikesneithermusicnorsports.三、运用并列句【例8】我不喜欢他，他很自私。01【一般】Idon’tlikehim.Heisselfish.02【高级】Idon’tlikehim,forheisselfish.03三、运用并列句04030102Heworkshardhimself.Heencouragesustoworkhard,too.Henotonlyworkshardhimself,butalsoencouragesustoworkhard.Theseglassesareveryexpensive.Pleasebecarefulwiththem.Pleasebecarefulwiththeseglasses,fortheyareveryexpensive.运用并列连词合并句子1HalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols.48%oftheboysfavoursportsstars.2HalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridolswhile48%oftheboysfavoursportsstars.3Iamgoodatexpressingmyself.Ihavethelanguageadvantageoverothers.4NotonlyamIgoodatexpressingmyself,butIalsohavethelanguageadvantageoverothers.Accordingtotheprofessor,thecauseofshort-sightednessisverycomplicated.Nomedicinecancureit.Accordingtotheprofessor,thecauseofshort-sightednessisverycomplicatedsonomedicinecancureit.12Thegovernmentshouldbeawareoftheimportanceofprovidingeducationforallthechildren.Theaveragepeopleshouldbeawareoftheimportance,too.Thegovernment,aswellastheaveragepeople/Boththegovernmentandtheaveragepeopleshouldbeawareoftheimportanceofprovidingeducationforallthechildren.12最常用的是状语从句、主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和定语从句。【例9】废水被直接排放到河里，河水被严重污染。【一般】Wastewaterisdirectlyletintotheriver.Theriverisseriouslypolluted.【高级】Theriverisseriouslypollutedbecausewastewaterisdirectlyletintoit.四、运用复合句1【例10】他病得很重，这让我着急。2【一般】Hewasseriouslyill.Itmademeworried.3【高级】Hewasseriouslyill,whichmademeworried.四、运用复合句Iwasreallyastonishedthatheneverlostag