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读后续写练习写作指导讲义

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

TheOtherShoe

Shoesaremadeforwalking.

But?Aamir,ahomelessIndianboy,doubtedit.Wanderingthenoisyrailwayplatform,hefoundoneofhis?flip-flops?(人字拖鞋)brokenagain.Hehurriedtoacorner,satdownandtriedtofixit,hisbarefootpressingawkwardlyagainsttheground.However,itwasbeyondrepair.

Hegaveupandlookedaroundaimlessly,staringatpeople’sshoes.Suddenly,hiseyesweredrawntotwoboyishlegswearingflawlesslywhitesocksandequally?perfect?blackleather?shoes,whichwereglitteringinthemid-daysun.Itwasaboyofhisage.Hecouldn’t?treasure?hispossessiontoomuch,obviously,becauseeverytenseconds,hestopped,bentdownandcarefullywipedadustortwofromhisshoes.Hisfatherwasconstantlyglancingoverandurginghim,“Hurryup!The?train?iscoming!”

Aamir’seyesfollowedthefatherandson,butmostlytheleathershoes,asifenchanted(被施魔法的).Imagininghimselfwearingthem,thecomfortfromthegoodleather,thejaw-droppinglookonhisfriends’faces,hecouldn’thelpcrackingabig?smile.

Thebellofthetraindrewhimback;thefancy-shoeboyandhisfatherwereabouttogetaboard.Theytriedtocrowdintothedoorway.However,theinstanttheboyenteredthecompartment(车厢),oneofhisshoes?fell?offandbeforehecouldpickitup,thetrainbegantopullaway.

Theshoewasnowlyingaloneontheplatform.Aamir’seyeslitupwithexcitement.Likeanarrow,heshotfortheshoeandthenpickeditup,holdingitwithbothhandsasifholdingtheQueen’scrown.Afterafewsecondsofhesitatingandlookingfromtheshoetothetrainandback,hebeganracing-withonlyonegoodshoe,hisflip-flop.

Heheldtheleathershoeup,tryingtopassittotheboythroughthe?window,whowasdesperately?reachingouthishandaswell.However,itwasnevercloseenough.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的