读后续写：公园清洁小分队 讲义--高考英语复习写作专项.docx

读后续写：公园清洁小分队讲义

读后续写（（武汉市2025高中毕业生二月调研考试读后续写））

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。?

Astheschoolyearwrappedupandthefirstdaysofsummervacationstretchedoutbeforethem,Max,Ava,andSamhadaperfectdayplannedattheirusualcommunitypark.Thistidylittleparkwastheirgo-tospotforunwindingandjustenjoyingsomepreciousleisuretime,

Maxrushedaheadwithasoccerballunderhisarm,AvaandSamtrailingcloselybehind,fullofenergy.Itwasthekindofdaythatpromisedendlessfunandcarefreelaughter.Butastheysteppedintothepark,theirheartsank.Theonce-belovedplaygroundwasnowachaoticmessofdiscardedtrash(乱扔的垃圾)-candywrappersstuckintheslidesmetalbars,plasticbottlesrollinginthewind,andchipbagslyingunderfoot.

Lookatthis!Avashoutedindisbeliefasshepointedtothegarbageneartheswings.Maxsfacedarkenedwithfrustration.Thethreefriendsstoodfrozen,theireyesscanningtheplaygroundarea.Theoncecleanslidesandswingswerenowburiedunderalayerofcandywrappersandplasticbottles.Avacastaglance(瞥一眼)atthewalkingtrails,wheregarbageseemedtohavetakenover,withdiscardedbagsandcanslyingeverywhere.Samlookedoutatthegrassyfields-adisaster.Theparkwasvast,buteverycornerseemedtohavebeentouchedbythecarelessnessofothers.

Whowouldbesothoughtless?Maxwhispered,shakinghishead.

Samkickedaplasticbottleinanger,sendingitflyingacrossthegrass.Itsnotjustthoughtless--itsdisrespectful.

Avasighedthoughtfullybutsuddenlyherfacelitup.Wecantjustleaveitlikethis.Whydontwedosomethingaboutit?Wecan,say,formaCleanupSquad(清洁小分队)…”?shesaid,hervoicesoftbutdetermined.

注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

MaxandSamexchangedanexcitedglance.

Unexpectedly,otherparkersjoinedinastheydidthecleanup.

故事梳理与续写指导

1.?情节线

发现污染：三人看到脏乱的公园，决定清理。

努力清理：分工合作，但任务艰巨。

集体加入：其他游客被感染，加入行动。

公园恢复：集体努力下，公园重现整洁。

自然回馈：三人感受到公园的“感谢”。