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eq\a\vs4\al()eq\a\vs4\al(概要写作微技能?对应学生用书P199)

简化与合并

概要写作要求用60词左右概括一篇350词左右的文章，因此须要对冗杂的信息进行简化和合并，以达到概括的目的。简化和合并信息可以采纳下列几种技巧：

1．删除细微环节：剔除细微环节信息，只保留主干内容。

Inaddition,iftheschoolbuysautomatichanddryers,wecansavemoney.Thereisaterriblewasteofpapertowelsintherestrooms.

→Additionally,itcanhelptheschoolsavemoney.

2．简化描述：把长段的描述变成短小、简洁的句子。假如材料中描述某人或某事用了好几个句子，那么你只要把它们变成一两句即可。

Therewere30cowsonthefarmthathisgrandmotherhadtomilkeveryday.Itwashardworkforhisgrandmother.

→Hisgrandmotherworkedhardmilking30cowsdaily.

3．避开重复：在原文中，为了强调某个主题，可能会重复，应当删除或者合并这些重复信息。

Theywerewaitingforthemeetingtobegin.Theytalkedwitheachother.Theytalkedaboutthewomensfootballteam.TheteamhadwonvictoriesinGuangzhou.

→Whilewaitingforthemeetingtobegin,theytalkedaboutthevictorieswonbythewomensfootballteaminGuangzhou.

4．压缩长句：有些句子比较冗长，可以进行压缩和简化，使之简洁。

Hiscourageinbattlemightwithoutexaggerationbecalledlion-like.

→Hewasverybraveinbattle.

5．运用词组代替整句或者从句。

BeautifulmountainslikeMountTai,LushanMountain,andMountHuang,werevisitedbyonlyafewpeopleinthepast.Today,betterwages,holidayswithpay,newhotelsonthesemountains,andbettertrainandbusservices,havebroughtthemwithinreachofmanywhoneverthoughtofvisitingthemtenyearsago.

→BeautifulmountainslikeMountTai,oncevisitedbyonlyafewpeople,aretodayaccessibletomany,thankstobetterwages,paidholidays,newhotelsandbettertransportationservices.

6．运用概括性的词代替详细的词。

ShebroughthomeseveralChineseandEnglishnovels,afewcopiesofTimeandNewsweekandsometextbooks.Sheintendedtoreadallofthemduringthewintervocation.

→Shebroughthomealotofbookstoreadduringthevocation.

7．运用主从复合句合并信息：主从复合句即我们常用的名词性从句、状语从句和定语从句。可依据信息的不同作用选择不同的从句进行合并信息。

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