Unit6 Keep our city clean写作课练习名师教案名师教案名师教案.docxVIP

Exercisepaper

Makeamindmap

Writeaproposal

要求：1.语句通顺，字数80字左右。

2.注意大小写，标点符号。

3.多使用连词，好词好句。

Keepourcityclean

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Let’sjudge(请同桌给你的作文评分给出等级哦！)

最终得分：___________

Tommy的倡议书初稿：（找找里面的错误，并划出来哦！）

Ourcityisdirty.Rubishmakesourcitydirty.wecanputrubishinthebin.Theairisdirty.Wecanonfootgotoschool.Theriverisdirty,Wecan’tthrowrubbishinthewater.

Tommy根据写作标准修改后的倡议书：

（找找Tommy修改后的作文，有哪些值得我们学习的地方。可以划出来哦！）

Thecityisourhome,butitisdirtynow.

Smokefromcarsmakestheairdirty.Blacksmokefromfactoriesmakestheairdirtytoo.Tokeeptheairclean,wecantakethebusandthemetrotoschool.Wecanmovesomefactoriesaway.

Thestreetsaredirtyandmessybecauseofrubbish.Tokeepthestreetsclean,wecan’tthrowrubbishontheground.Wecanputrubbishinthebin.What’smore,wecanplantmoretrees.Treeshelpkeeptheairclean.

Inaword,it’sourdutytokeepthecityclean.Let’stakeactionsnow!